Hi @reneep, I think you have nailed the lighting on the model and the shot has a nice broad dynamic range which often looks good in black and white. Where I think it could be changed… not sure – I think those railings on the top of the bridge take the eye away from the model (or possibly towards her legs rather than face). So that element of composition is what I would look at.
Hi Renee, that’s a perfect composition and I also really like the model’s pose as well as the lighting. I’m not sure if I would change anything – I’d maybe experiment with slight vignetting and try out different b&w conversions, mainly for fun.
She is a beautiful model. You nailed the tones. The expression looks great. The lighting is perfect. I don’t like the pose. It looks unnatural and uncomfortable, especially given the location and the attire.