- December 28, 2018 at 5:20 pm #382019
I just realized how long it’s been since I posted anything for critique.
This shot was taken with a 7 yr old Sony point and shoot that’s small enough for a vest pocket as I walked along the shoreline. The contrast and curved lines appealed to me so I stopped long enough to snap a few photos. I’ve slightly burned the upper left corner to reduce the eye grab from the brightness there.
I realize that there is no distinct focal point to direct the viewer’s eye towards but I still kind of liked it. I’m wondering how the sharks will chew on this one.
- December 29, 2018 at 1:20 pm #382103
Hi Gary, I like the semi-abstractness and contrast in the center with the curved lines but the foreground looks like something on the sidewalk New Year’s morning. I over did everything in this edit.
- December 30, 2018 at 3:27 pm #382222
I like the concept of your edited version Lenny. I found that with the original, my eyes didn’t know what to focus on or what to look for.
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