Bull (Kelp that is)

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This topic contains 2 replies, has 3 voices, and was last updated by  bucweeet 6 months, 3 weeks ago.

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  • #382019

    Gary Zerbst
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    I just realized how long it’s been since I posted anything for critique.

    This shot was taken with a 7 yr old Sony point and shoot that’s small enough for a vest pocket   as I walked along the shoreline.  The contrast and curved lines appealed to me so I stopped long enough to snap a few  photos.    I’ve slightly burned the upper left corner to reduce the  eye grab from the brightness there.

    I realize that there is no distinct  focal point to direct the viewer’s eye towards but I still kind of liked it.   I’m wondering how the sharks will chew  on this one.

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  • #382103

    Lenny Wollitz
    Participant

    Hi Gary, I like the semi-abstractness and contrast in the center with the curved lines but the foreground looks like something on the sidewalk New Year’s morning.  I over did everything in this edit.gary's

  • #382222

    bucweeet
    Participant

    I like the concept of your edited version Lenny.  I found that with the original, my eyes didn’t know what to focus on or what to look for.

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