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March 31, 2021 at 3:37 am #473583
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? YesFront light, shadows, highlights, … CC?

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March 31, 2021 at 4:37 am #473586
Very well seen, indeed, Peter. I would have liked to see some more lighter parts/highlights to balance off the result.
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March 31, 2021 at 4:41 am #473588
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? Yes@mistyisle : ok, unfortunately I don’t have any space on the top. I have tried to add more in shadows:

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March 31, 2021 at 6:01 am #473591
JasenkaGParticipant- https://instagram.com/the_queen_of_poppies
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@jasenkag- Posts:3459
Allows Edits? YesInteresting perspective and really great framing. I would increase the clarity in Lightroom a little bit.
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March 31, 2021 at 7:16 am #473594
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? YesI use Capture One. So I’m not sure about Clarity in PS – does it change contrast in mid-tones?
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April 2, 2021 at 5:20 am #473717
JasenkaGParticipant- https://instagram.com/the_queen_of_poppies
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@jasenkag- Posts:3459
Allows Edits? Yes@peternowak I thought Capture One has a clarity slider too. It can alter the transition between light and dark edges. I’m not sure if it would work in this case, but I’d play with it.

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April 2, 2021 at 7:26 am #473726
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? YesYes, I know. But sometimes the same name means other function.
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March 31, 2021 at 8:22 am #473609
It seems a little flat to me Peter. I raised the brightest parts and applied a gradient mask from far to near. I brightened the glass ware on the table to give the eye something to rest on. Added a custom vignette to darken the sides a bit to guide the attention to the middle and add more punch.

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March 31, 2021 at 12:42 pm #473623
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? YesGreat edit Rob. I always forget something obvious. Post process check list is necessary… 🙂
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March 31, 2021 at 1:27 pm #473625
Peter, this feels relaxing and I like it. I find the bright counter at the top a bit of a distraction because everything else has a mellow sameness about it.
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March 31, 2021 at 1:34 pm #473628
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? YesThanks Lenny.
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March 31, 2021 at 1:59 pm #473633
Like the variety of the shapes and curves. Here is a B+W radial gradient that brought contrast but maybe darkened side tables too much.

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March 31, 2021 at 2:34 pm #473637
Dahlia AmbroseKeymaster- https://www.instagram.com/livingsta/
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Allows Edits? YesGreat idea Peter and love the abstract frame. I like your second edit 🙂
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March 31, 2021 at 5:52 pm #473651
Federico AlegriaParticipant- https://www.instagram.com/federico.alegria/
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@federicoalegria- Posts:2743
Allows Edits? YesI think everything has already been said here, so I’ll just vote for @reyers suggestion 😄
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April 2, 2021 at 5:03 am #473714
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? YesThanks Dahlia and Federico.
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April 2, 2021 at 3:13 pm #473735
TershaKeymaster- https://www.flickr.com/photos/diane_rose/
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@tersha- Posts:19185
Allows Edits? YesI really like the shot Peter, and vote for Robs edit.
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April 2, 2021 at 5:28 pm #473742
Annoyingly Lenny got in before me! 🙂
It really works but as said..the top centre distracts from the ambience.
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April 3, 2021 at 5:43 am #473750
Peter NowakParticipant- http://www.instagram.com/petr.nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1064
Allows Edits? YesThanks Tersha and Falxy. I locally masked top of the image to supress distracting effect:

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April 3, 2021 at 10:43 am #473775
Dahlia AmbroseKeymaster- https://www.instagram.com/livingsta/
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@dahliaambrose- Posts:12162
Allows Edits? YesWow! Now that you have posted this version, I like this one the best 🙂
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April 4, 2021 at 10:38 am #473848
Me.too! Lines and shapes.
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