Geometry & colors

[Peter Nowak]

[Patrick]

Using street lingo ..That’s sick , WOW you nailed this image big time mate kudos to you for seeing and executing’s this lovely piece of Art .. This is one of my fav’s from you Peter i can ‘t say much more than it really does appeal to me ..I love it 🙂

Thanks for posting mate.

[Dahlia Ambrose]

Great geometry, patterns, colours and textures Peter. Love it and I cannot see anything that can be improved in this image 🙂

[Mistyisle]

Whilst I like it, Peter, I would like to see it in B&W, then I think it would really shine.

[Rob Wood (Admin)]

Was thinking this too.

[JasenkaG]

I’m with Dahlia here, I love this image the way it is. These pastel colors work great together!

[Greg]

Wow. No advice or ST comments come to mind.

[Peter Nowak]

Thanks to all for your nice comments. However I’ve tried to create the second version:

[Dahlia Ambrose]

Hi Peter, I am also thinking if it would work without the shadow line, but also not sure if removing it would ruin the image 🙂

[Frank]

A little color boost, over-sharpening and a flip.  Just for another look.!

[Dahlia Ambrose]

I like this one too Frank 🙂

[beth]

i think frank is on the right track here.  my first thought when i saw this was it reminded me of composition with red blue and yellow by peit mondrian or whatever his name is.  go with the bold, saturated colors and take the red tint out of the sidewalk.

[Peter Nowak]

Frank, I was afraid to saturate too much. But it seems it looks good.

[Falxy]

Agree with Mistyman with b&w……….well spotted! 🙂

[Peter Nowak]

[Dahlia Ambrose]

I like this Peter. It has a good range of tones 🙂

[Anne Hornsby]

@peternowak  Hi, Peter.  I like it best in B&W.  You may want to experiment with a bit more drama – contrast in tone across the different shapes.  Cool image.

[Peter Nowak]

@annehornsby :  thanks Anne. I feel color better cos this image is about color a lot. Your image has interesting strong gritty look…

I haven’t expected that this image bring so much attention. Thanks to all.

[bucweeet]

If there is room on the RH side, I would take the crop out to have the apex of the triangle show at the RH edge of the image.

As it is now, the apex is cut off.

[Peter Nowak]

hi Bucweeet, thanks for feedback…

[bucweeet]

Not sure about others, but my eyes find it a bit more soothing to look at.  As there are 2 different ‘feels’ to this image, I would look at both and see which one feels better to your eye.  Both work well, but each has its own vibe to me.

[Lenny Wollitz]

Peter, IMHO, this is about color.  Franks over saturation makes it a bit of an abstract.  I would prefer it without the shadow.

[Peter Nowak]

Lenny: yes, shadows are distractig and for me grass too, it’s unkempt too much…

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