- April 30, 2020 at 1:50 am #440750
One of my lucky shots, though I did recognise the occasion. Settings were f6.3; 1/500sec; ISO 720; 195 mms (292.5 equiv) on a Nikon D5200 with a Nikkor 18-300 lens 3.5-6.3. Cropped initially to not show the very apparent genitalia, however, thinking about it now, the outcome concentrates the view where it is best, regardless.
- April 30, 2020 at 10:06 am #440779Kent DuFaultParticipant
Very interesting, Jim. I really like it. My comments are borne only from personal opinion. It’s quite fine as it stands. I would clone out the whiter areas in the background, and perhaps ever so slightly darken the background a bit.
- April 30, 2020 at 5:19 pm #440832Anne HornsbyParticipant
Hi, Jim. His expression is fascinating; I really like it. I find the background color to be very distracting, and feel it undermines the beautiful soft tones of the fur. I would try desaturating the background a lot and see what you think. I also wonder if there is a way to lighten the eye area. Have fun!
- May 2, 2020 at 10:17 pm #441010
Thanks Kent and Anne, for your very useful suggestions. I have altered the background and as I post, notice again Kent’s comment saying “ever so slightly”. Oops, may have gone more than that, but anyhow!
Anne, I had brightened the eyes and changed the contrast a bit already, but having had another look have now brightened just the whites of the eyes. The teeth draw the attention, but the eyes now match better, I hope!
- May 4, 2020 at 7:09 am #441146Jasenka GParticipant
Love this shot, looks like a lady with a fresh perm 🙂
Jokes aside, I think Kent’s suggestion was great and your last edit proves it.
- May 9, 2020 at 11:18 am #441791Anne HornsbyParticipant
Great image, Jasenka – a lady with a fresh perm. The hair on this gal (I guess?) is amazing. Jim, I definitely like the darker background color better. I wonder what you think if you desaturate it quite a bit? I’m not sure what causes the halo around the baboon in the background – regardless of background color — the limits of my understanding of pp.
- May 19, 2020 at 7:58 pm #445926
Yes, you are dead right Anne. In fact the halo was caused by the vignette I had added, so have now removed it. Fine without. I have desaturated the background too.
- May 20, 2020 at 12:47 pm #446058GregParticipant
Love this latest version. The background blends well with the darker colors around the chin and makes the face just pop. The original background looked like he was on the bump at Wrigley Field.
Hope there was plenty of safety measures between you and those incisors.
- May 21, 2020 at 8:30 am #446169FrankParticipant
Sheltering in place my hair looked a bit like this. So, I gave myself a haircut. Now I really do not want to go out in public. But, at least I can stay in and enjoy fun photos like this one. Great capture and congratulations on nailing the focus!
- May 23, 2020 at 10:12 am #446367TobieModerator
Misty beat me to it so thumbs up to his last edit. 🙂
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