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    • #526388
      Lenny Wollitz
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        A detail from a construction site.  I need a title and other ST stuff.

      • #526420
        Pat Garrett
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          @el-dub  Lenny I have stared at this and am drawing a blank. At first it looked like a whale’s mouth with some sharp teeth. I see the contrast between smooth and sharp. I also “saw” a brush on top of the teeth of a comb. The only word that comes to mind as I look again, is “Projections” or “Projecting” or something to do with the very top or highest peak… “Summit”  I’m stumped and would love to know what you come up with.

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          beth
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            i suck at titles so i’ll leave that to others.

            the balcony curve just before the windows is a tad hot and seems to blend in with the wall and window frames behind it.  it also feels a little unbalanced since there’s a lot going on in the bottom right and nothing in the top left.

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            Tersha
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              Hi Lenny, I’ve looked at this a couple of times, and like Pat. not really come up with anything … a shame, because I like it.

            • #526423
              Marty E
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                @el-dub Like Pat, I’ve been stumped on at title for this. I like where Pat is heading with her suggestions. I’m now thinking about “odd men out,” competing forces, disturbance, or simply tension. I’m not sure ultimately who/what wins. The “whale” dominates but the rods are definitely disturbances. Possibly “intrusions” or “extrusions?” In any case, I like how thought-provoking this shot is! Great conceptual shot.

                • #526427
                  Marty E
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                    A few more thoughts for you @el-dub. Weirdly, I’m reminded of a Mark Twain quote. “There’s lies, damn lies, and statistics,” so maybe “Politics?” 😀

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                  Pat Garrett
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                    @el-dub  Lenny, this image is driving me crazy! Two words came to mind as possible titles or a variation of the word:  “Juxtaposed” and “Incongruent”.

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                    Robert Apple
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                      I would most likely call it “Sticks and Stones”

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                        Pat Garrett
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                          Like it

                      • #526456
                        Lenny Wollitz
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                          I like sticks and stones except for the lack of stones. Maybe sticks and stoned would work here in Mexico. I am leaning toward “The Veranda” which is not very cute but is descriptive.

                          Pat, I am in the middle of prime whale watching here in La Paz, MX and it would be great to work that into the title but I am drawing a blank.

                          Marty, I love Mark Twain and his quotes especially about politicians.

                          I tried a crop on the bottom which I am undecided on. What do you think.

                           

                           

                           

                          I like sticks and stones except for the lack of stones. Maybe sticks and stoned would work here in Mexico. I am leaning toward “The Veranda” which is not very cute but is descriptive.

                          Pat, I am in the middle of prime whale watching here in La Paz, MX and it would be great to work that into the title but I am drawing a blank.

                          Marty, I love Mark Twain and his quotes especially about politicians.

                          I tried a crop on the bottom which I am undecided on. What do you think.

                           

                          • #526533
                            Marty E
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                              @el-dub  I like the original best, the “whale” is more imposing with its great visual weight. It won’t be easy for the “sticks” to take it down. Glad to know you love Mark Twain, here’s my personal tweak lately on the quote I posted above. In our current political climate, I say it’s “lies, damn lies, and politics!” And don’t get me started on”rhetoric” lol

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                            Pat Garrett
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                              @el-dub Mexico, whale season? Ballena is Spanish for whale, right?  “Ballena piedra y Los Clavos” (or “Palos” for sticks). My Spanish isn’t that great but might be something there. Sounds sophisticated in Spanish 😀

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                              beth
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                                the stoned whale

                              • #526484
                                Lenny Wollitz
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                                  Pat, whales come here every summer to have their babies.  Lots of tourism.

                                  https://www.golapaz.com/things-to-do/attractions-tours/whale-watching/

                                  I have gone whale watching but don’t shoot many photos because there are so many on the net that are much better than mine.   And, you are in an open boat with a bunch of active people.  Another reason is that I just had to replace a camera that got wet so I am being very careful with the new one.

                                  • #526531
                                    Pat Garrett
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                                      Whale watching is a big thing up here in New England too. Challenging for all the reasons you mentione, to get decent photos.

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                                      Lenny, I showed the image to my husband and he came up with this title:
                                      The Elegance of Simplicity

                                      we prefer the original image compared to the second cropped image

                                    • #526529
                                      Lenny Wollitz
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                                        Hey Frog, I like it!

                                      • #526541
                                        Rob Eyers
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                                          La Casa de la Pérgola.

                                          That’s all I’ve got Lenny.

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                                            Not sure how I missed this one. It’s a cracker, @el-dub

                                            MOAR!

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                                            ElinL
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                                              Bird-bath.

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                                              Anne Hornsby
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                                                I like the 1st photo best, too, Lenny.  I tend to literal titles for minimalist images.  Such as “Curve with Staves”      For something goofy & musical, what first came to my mind looking at it was Twist and Stake.    🙂

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                                                Patrick
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                                                  Flip it upside down and it looks like a sneaker

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