Newspapers kiosk.

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    • #449494
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      Street. Newspapers kiosk. And…
      CC?

    • #449499
      Rob Eyers
      Participant

      Interesting. Can’t help but wonder if it would have been better with the focus on the hand with the cigarette. I think it could use just a touch of brightening. I like the over all b&w processing which is certainly the right approach for this image IMHO.

      EDIT: Maybe burn the glass reflections a bit too.

      • This reply was modified 1wk, 6d ago by Rob Eyers.
    • #449508
      Dahlia Ambrose
      Keymaster

      Hi Petr, this is a very good shot. I am with Rob on having the focus on the hands. You could have also used a narrow aperture to get the newspapers and the hand in focus. Not sure what settings you used 🙂

    • #449520
      Lenny Wollitz
      Participant

      My eye is drawn to the arm and cigarette.    Is that what you intended?

    • #449578
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      @Rob, @Dahlia: focus on hand would be better definitely.

      @Lenny: yes, hand with the cigarette is the subject.

      New version: Brightened hand. Burned glass reflections.

      • This reply was modified 1wk, 6d ago by Petr Nowak.
    • #449605
      Rob Eyers
      Participant

      Better for me Petr. Nothing can be done about the focus on the hand.

      I would lean toward also brightening the whites of the mags. on the left to balance with the brightness of the ones on the right.

    • #449622
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      The third version:

    • #449667
      Greg
      Participant

      I like the crop in version 3. If the hand is the subject, it needs to be larger than it is in relation to the rest of the photo, as it is in version 3. And now it’s pretty much a nitpick, but I think the left carousel of magazines was brightened a little too much. They seem a bit washed out to me.

       

      • This reply was modified 1wk, 4d ago by Greg.
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    • #449984
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      Thanks to all for CC !!!

    • #449999
      Rob Eyers
      Participant

      I agree with Greg that the left mags. may have been brightened too much. Might have been better if a luminosity mask was used to zero in on only the lightest parts of them.

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