Old and new.

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    • #449664
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      Old and new (Old Town Bridge Tower and tram in movement – Prague).
      Tram brightened. Sky darkened.
      Any thoughs ?
      I wonder if remove tram trolley or not…

    • #449669
      Greg
      Participant

      I’m not sure what a “tram trolley” is. If you are referring to the wire above the tram, I think it would be much cleaner if it was removed. Also, the building in the center seems a little dark. Is there any detail to be brought to the surface by brightening it a bit?

      Nice shot. I like it.

    • #449676
      Dahlia Ambrose
      Keymaster

      Hi Petr, this is a beautiful image with a semi-abstract look. I like the colours, the details in the sky and the reflections on the tram. The only thing that could be improved is, to slightly brighten both the buildings, just the top part. Not sure if the darkness is due to a vignette or something similar 🙂

    • #449678
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      The second version (brightened the tower, and removed wire):

    • #449681
      Federico Alegria
      Participant

      Hi there Petr, I really like what you did here (both first and second one are nice), honestly, I don’t fin the wire to be distracting at all. What I feel odd is the tightness of the frame, which leaves so little breathing air on top of the building. But that is just a highly subjective feeling I’m getting. Overall, it is a magnificent color photograph, and that bright red is quite the main character here.

    • #449683
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      More space on the top/left:

      • #449714
        Greg
        Participant

        Beautiful.

    • #449702
      Graham Hart
      Participant

      I like the juxtaposition of the rapid modern world against the staid solid structure of the past. Sort of says “time stands still for no-one”. The looming clouds feel like nature overseeing the changes happening beneath. Great pic Petr.

    • #449719
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      @Graham, @Greg: thanks. 🙂

    • #449724
      JasenkaG
      Keymaster

      Hi Petr, removing the tram trolley was a good idea, the image looks cleaner now.  I would maybe increase the clarity in Lightroom just a little bit.

    • #449726
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      Increased clarity:

    • #449985
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      Thanks to all for CC !!!

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