@skinklives9902
Hi there Collin, and welcome to our place! First of all, thanks for sharing your personal photos with us, that is something not so many people are willing to do. I’m sure you’ll get some really nice comments from our fellow Light Stalkers, but if you want structured critique, then you’ll have to take a spin over at the Feedback Forum https://lightstalking.us/forums/forum/the-shark-tank/.
About your photograph here, all I can say is that it is a fantastic portrait with a real candid nature! I wouldn’t change a thing of it.