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      Peter Nowak
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        I don’t know how to name this image. I wonder if it’s visual plaything only or anything more…

        CC?

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        Kent DuFault
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          I think it’s very interesting. Does it need a title? Maybe not… I actually think the image is improved by removing the right third of the shot. Cropping just to the left of those two windows on the far right. That area really draws my eyes and holds them. Yet, I think the left 2/3rds is far more interesting.

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            Petr, I find my eyes drawn to the third sock from the left, the ‘leg’, above the ‘sock’.  It is so bright that it draws attention away from everything else.   You should definitely consider toning that down considerably.  Perhaps you may need to think about marrying this idea with Kent’s suggestion (though not necessarily).  Try various combinations and see what happens.  If you do not experiment then you will not progress,  each attempt is learning.

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            Peter Nowak
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              Cropped to the left + toning down right leg:

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              Peter Nowak
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                Full version:

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                Kent DuFault
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                  Of the 3 versions… I like the last one best. It seems more balanced.

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