Reflection

This topic contains 5 replies, has 3 voices, and was last updated by  Kent DuFault 1 week, 6 days ago.

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  • #412791

    Petr Nowak
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    I don’t know how to name this image. I wonder if it’s visual plaything only or anything more…

    CC?

  • #412804

    Kent DuFault
    Participant

    I think it’s very interesting. Does it need a title? Maybe not… I actually think the image is improved by removing the right third of the shot. Cropping just to the left of those two windows on the far right. That area really draws my eyes and holds them. Yet, I think the left 2/3rds is far more interesting.

  • #412839

    Mistyisle
    Participant

    Petr, I find my eyes drawn to the third sock from the left, the ‘leg’, above the ‘sock’.  It is so bright that it draws attention away from everything else.   You should definitely consider toning that down considerably.  Perhaps you may need to think about marrying this idea with Kent’s suggestion (though not necessarily).  Try various combinations and see what happens.  If you do not experiment then you will not progress,  each attempt is learning.

  • #412844

    Petr Nowak
    Participant

    Cropped to the left + toning down right leg:

  • #412845

    Petr Nowak
    Participant

    Full version:

  • #413200

    Kent DuFault
    Participant

    Of the 3 versions… I like the last one best. It seems more balanced.

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