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November 15, 2020 at 11:53 am #463207
Greg
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@glegg- Posts:683
Allows Edits? YesThe intent here is to market it to individuals and businesses who have shown interest in displaying the riverfront here in Quincy, IL USA.
f/36.0, 1/30, ISO200, 55.0mm
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November 15, 2020 at 6:54 pm #463228
I like this a lot, Greg, however I think that the crop at the very apex of the (spire?) on the right is too severe. I would like to see more at the top.
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November 16, 2020 at 6:54 am #463242
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November 16, 2020 at 9:37 am #463263
Greg
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Allows Edits? YesI agree with you both. Hacking off the last few inches of the cupola is not good. It’s time to figure out how to extend the canvas in PS. Looks like a challenge, as I’m thinking I’ll have to recreate a lot of support wires and where they go. Perhaps I’ll wait until I can get down to the river again on a good sunset evening and retake it with composition in mind (I was dodging parking lot traffic as I took this). Thanks to both of you.
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November 16, 2020 at 12:34 pm #463290
Dahlia Ambrose
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Allows Edits? YesLove this image and the silhouetted lines and shapes. I agree with the above comments about having more space on top. Also you could try to very slightly bring out details in the foreground if it is an interesting one 🙂
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November 16, 2020 at 3:40 pm #463312
Greg
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Allows Edits? YesThanks, Dahlia. The foreground contains a teen-age boy who I was trying not to brighten so he would appear. But I will experiment with a bit of judicious lightening, avoiding the boy. Or, maybe the boy would be just fine — I didn’t think of that possibility.
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