- December 4, 2019 at 3:01 pm #426736
Spent the Holidays in the Smoky Mountains at a family get together. I knew the photography would be hard to get anything original and it was! This was the best image but I am not happy with it.
I think the light and view are great but I think the image is lacking.
- No clear focal point so my eyes wander around to much.
- No foreground interest. I tried to find something but nothing but scrub of tree tops.
I edited it because it was the best one but I am not really crazy about but I am my worst critic. Would love to hear what you would have done.
- December 5, 2019 at 7:05 pm #426820Steve WalkerParticipant
Not sure what you were hoping for. This is a sweeping landscape, typical of high vantage points in the Smokey’s and Blue Ridge. For some reason, I can’t enlarge the image. The time of day is a bit early so you have a lot of dark. You might not have had a more colorful sky and better light on the ridges. The highlights in the hollers is nice. I might try to warm them up a bit (adjust white balance). I might try to lighten the ridges as well, especially where there is green rather than the more distant blues. A bit of drama might result from cropping to a panorama. I would probably crop out the white cloud top and reduce the foreground ridge to accomplish this. The dark make this a bit unusual– not so much your typical sunrise image. Use it to remember the feeling of the cool morning air and the thrill of being present.
- December 5, 2019 at 11:38 pm #426836MistyisleParticipant
I really like what I can see, Jeff. I think that you are too hard, and demanding, of yourself. Would like to see a larger image, though. Did click on it and it remained the same size. The lighter spots in the right place, to me, make the image. Also the lighter area – top left, which should be a no/no. Well done indeed!
- December 6, 2019 at 7:51 am #426859Dahlia AmbroseKeymaster
Hi Jeff, I like the light falling in the valleys. I agree with Mistyisle’s comment about the top from left to about half way through being bright. Would be nice to have more details in there 🙂
Also, not sure what settings you used to shoot. The image looks a bit soft and noisy.
- December 6, 2019 at 8:50 am #426863
Thanks for the input. I tried to link to a Flickr image and it worked at first, but now now and I don’t know why? But here is a link. Just realized it is reduced to 1200×1200 so it doesn’t help much. I don’t have a full res. image on line at the moment.
I used to Post under the user name Kudzu but have haven’t been active on here in over a year. I tried to log in and refused to accept my password and it will not send me the email to recover my password so I had to create a new account. Sent a note to the admin but just silence there too.
- December 6, 2019 at 12:00 pm #426879
Went back and looked and (of course) you guys were right. The top left was blown out. I can’t believe I missed that. I always turn on the exposure indicator and aim to have a tiny amount blown out and totally underexposed so I know I have the full tonal range. Obvious somewhere along the line I goofed.
Decided to take another stab at the edit. Used a more panoramic crop. Fixed the blown out sky. Tweaked a few other things and I like this version better. Still find the lack of a focal point bothers me. Never like whey eyes wander around and don’t rest on anything.
- December 9, 2019 at 7:44 am #427090Petr NowakParticipant
I feel the image unbalanced: the top is very bright and central part of image is dark. It leads my eyes to the top and the main part i.e. mountain ridges remain out of attention.
I’d definitely wait for better light to have some light rays on the central part of image. And crop out the top bright part.
I cant’ see large version of image. Maybe it looks better in bigger view…
- December 9, 2019 at 12:02 pm #427129
- December 9, 2019 at 12:43 pm #427132
Thank you but it is resolved now. Can use my original username again.
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