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Peter Nowak.
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November 26, 2019 at 2:29 am #426062
Peter Nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1061
Allows Edits? YesICM, both silhouettes were darkened. CC?
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November 26, 2019 at 4:53 am #426076
JasenkaG
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@jasenkag- Posts:3459
Allows Edits? YesHi Petr, this image works great in my opinion, those neon colors and movement give it a futuristic vibe. I would perhaps make these silhouettes even darker – they would stand out more in that case.
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November 26, 2019 at 10:31 am #426120
Excellent Petr! Love it! Jasenka’s suggestion might improve it. But quite frankly, I really like it the way it is.
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November 26, 2019 at 11:39 am #426132
Patrick
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@patrickw- Posts:9083
Allows Edits? YesSmart shot , liking the vibe.
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November 26, 2019 at 2:51 pm #426155
looks like you were taking photos while on the tilt-a-whirl at the carnival. i like the two guys coming out of the light. only suggestion is crop off a bit at the bottom. there’s a large band of reddish brown that is much wider than the yellow and purple bands up top.
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November 26, 2019 at 10:34 pm #426183
Peter Nowak
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Allows Edits? YesGreat. Thanks!!!
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November 27, 2019 at 7:27 am #426213
Petr, for me the first version works better with the silhouettes disappearing in the twirl. Good shot.
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November 28, 2019 at 12:41 pm #426299
Federico Alegria
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@federicoalegria- Posts:2239
Allows Edits? YesI’m with Erik on this one, the first version looks more natural too! The subtle imperfections make the shot look very pleasing in my opinion.
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November 28, 2019 at 1:02 pm #426303
Dahlia Ambrose
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@dahliaambrose- Posts:10264
Allows Edits? YesHi Petr, This is a beautiful image with a semi-abstract look. I like the original version as it looks more real. I find the top left and bottom left a bit distracting as it breaks the sweep across the scene. Not sure what you think 🙂
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November 28, 2019 at 1:09 pm #426304
i like the original more, but prefer the crop of the second.
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November 28, 2019 at 6:25 pm #426309
Peter Nowak
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@peternowak- Posts:1061
Allows Edits? YesThird version. Old silhouettes and new crop.
Thanks for all comments !!!
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