“Big brother”? Yes.
I didn’t crop to keep whole space. I keep railings and silhoutte on the right and wall on the left as eye stoppers.
However I don’t see top reflections as important because very few people mention it. The left sign works well as an eye stopper especially because it plays its role. The right small sign can work as an eye…[Read more]
Good idea and good try. However if you are known for provoking and out-of-ordinary shots (vide Kent Du Fault) you definitely should make more:
- necklace, watch and dress doesn’t fit; get rid of necklace and watch, and use different dress; something more non-ordinary;
- use different background; out of focus and/or other place (dark cellar?)
Craig, first of all I’d choose only one image, the best one. Presenting more images complicates the discussion.
From the technical point of view: the first image has blown out some parts of fence.
I think the content/meaning factor of image is more important than technical one. And your images are missing some strong subject, some special content…[Read more]
Petr Nowak replied to the topic Reflections over Loch Indall on the Isle of Islay, scotland in the forum The Shark Tank 2 weeks, 3 days ago
As Rob has said: level horizont and move it off center.
Any additional element would better image (boat, bird, …).
Erik, I understand the try to catch foggy morning. However I wonder if any better angle would be possible. A lot of buildings don’t form any interesting subject. I think how to do it better and the only solution I’ve found is to delete it and try better next time. Here in ST I always don’t limit my critique in any way. So I think what I’d do with…[Read more]
hi Mario, I don’t shoot such photos so only my general thoughs:
- a lot of white spots (face, leg, shoulder); you need better control of lights/exposition;
- the white partially unsharp veil (or what is it) in the front seems weird to me; I’d put it to the right to not to cover legs;
- maybe other background to make some color contrast?
hello Vincenzo, I like silhouette and combination of ballon and birds. The top left part of sky distracts me, it’s too bright. I’d darken it or cut.
Ditto for the most left chimney. I’d cut it.
The image seems too dark as Graham said. I’d try to fiddle with middle tone point to change it.
I’m not sure about getting back some detail in the…[Read more]
Interesting image. It lacks some main subject I think. I’d choose some theme and focus on it only – on cars to catch movement (long exposure time probably) or on the sky with electricity poles to catch this.
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