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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Looking for feedback in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 7mo ago
Sorry, somehow I posted the image twice, and can’t figure out how to get rid of one. Here are the settings I used for the image:
Taken with Canon Mark 5D II and EF24-105mm lens. Focal length of 58mm, shutter speed of 1/10, aperture of 7.1 and ISO 2000. I would like feedback on the composition.
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Darlene Romano started the topic Looking for feedback in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 7mo ago
<a href="Fleet-Peeples-Dog-Park-Sunrise-7649-Optimized-for-Web.jpg by Darlene Romano on Light Stalking“><img src="Fleet-Peeples-Dog-Park-Sunrise-7649-Optimized-for-Web.jpg by Darlene Romano on Light Stalking” alt=”” />
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic old baum church 2 in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 7mo ago
I like the cropped and enhanced version, although there is a blue cast to the stones on the second and third windows now. I also have to say this is a very lovely shot. It would be interesting to see it in black and white. Love the angle and the slits of light showing on the ground and wall. It is a beautiful church. There really isn’t anything…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Desolate in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 7mo ago
I think you could have captured more of the mood if you were closer to the abandoned house and we saw a lot less sky and grass. You could try cropping the image to get rid of some of the foreground, which just makes the abandoned building, which is the main focus, look much smaller and insignificant. There is a lot of neutral gray in the image. I…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Reflections in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 7mo ago
I agree with the other comments in that the log in the foreground is distracting. I find myself wanting to see more of the water and less of the log. What settings did you use for this image?
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic old baum church in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 7mo ago
I just recently started using Nik plug-ins and really love them. I would highly recommend them if you can afford the $150 price tag.
I love this image, especially the clarity and tonal range. I would like to see the same image with the right side of the church closer to the right edge of the image so more of the hedge on the left would be…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Cloudy Day in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Hi @fagopher,
I would like to see the shot from a vantage point that allows the yellow bridge on the bottom right to take center stage. It creates a nice contrast the the blue-gray of the rest of the image. I agree that a neutral density filter would help to brighten up the sky. It’s tough to pull off this shot on a dreary day because there…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic One of my 1st focus stacking attempts in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Hi @jmidjr,
I haven’t tried focus stacking yet, but am intrigued by the process since I shoot a lot of Macro shots. It looks like you did a pretty good job on the stacking. I agree with @redman as far as the settings and the color adjustments. The shot would be a lot more effective if that Zinnia was popping, and the spider would show up…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Landscape cloudy midday light in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Hi @jimeuph1,
I like this image and would not have guessed that it was taken in the middle of the day, which is a good thing. I love the detail and the juxtaposition of the smooth green pastures in the middle section against the longer grass in the foreground. The detail in the sky is lovely, and the composition is pleasing. I shoot landscapes,…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Painted Mountains HDR critique in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Hi @bxfoto,
I think this is a lovely image and love the painterly feel of the mountains and sky. I have only utilized HDR on occasion, but like the process and think it can garner some great images, such as yours. What I like about your image is that you weren’t too heavy-handed with the HDR so the image still looks natural, vibrant and rich.
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Critique/tips to improve composition and 'bokeh' in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Hi @ jonathantimar,
I struggle with crowding my nature images, so I appreciate your comments about my crop and agree.
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Please critique in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Hi @penmar. I shot this Hibiscus outside. I was below the flower shooting up toward the sky, so the white in the background is actually the sky blown out. I’m not sure what I could do, if anything, to change that. Do you have any suggestions? Maybe I could have held a diffuser panel over the flower? I shot the image with a shutter speed of 1/160…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Please critique in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Hi @fidelito,
Thanks again for your helpful suggestions and comments. I didn’t even notice those two tiny leaf elements, but now that you have mentioned it, they are distracting. Yes, I used my 100mm Macro lens, with a shutter speed of 1/160 and an aperture of f/18. When I added a levels adjustment layer in Photoshop to set the white and black…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Please Critique in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
My settings were ISO 400, shutter speed 1/1000, and aperture f/2.8. I shot the image handheld, so maybe that explains the “fuzziness?” although it is probably the shallow depth of field. My lens was very close to the flower, so I probably only had about an inch of depth of field in total. I was focused on the center of the flower, so the petals…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Please Critique in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment on my image and offer your critiques @cgram43.
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Does the composition work? in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Thanks for your comments @Fidelito. I shot this image at a shutter speed of 1/800 and an aperture of f/4.5, so that is why the petals are not as sharp as the center of the flower. Using an aperture of 4.5 with as close as my lens was to the plant, I only got an inch or so of depth of field. My ISO was at 800 because it was an overcast…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano started the topic Does the composition work? in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Please Critique in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
Thank you very much for your suggestions @cgram43. I cropped the flower tight, so I can go back and add more space around it. I tend to crop tight, and I’m not sure why, but other people have mentioned to me before that I could use a little more room around my flowers. I went back into Lightroom and reworked the image. I was not able to add any…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Shadow in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
If you want to try an entirely new concept, photograph the plant frozen over a light box. Place the plant in a square pan with just enough water to cover the plant. Let it freeze. Remove the frozen plant and place it on top of a light box and photograph it. It will look lovely. Another suggestion would be to place it on a scanner or directly on a…[Read more]
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Darlene Romano replied to the topic Waterfall Session in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 8mo ago
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