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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Comments will be appreciated in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
This picture is very flat , and conveys nothing to me. i agree that black and white might help this .you might want to flip it for the ship to go right to left as well. more natural for the eye to follow .. could be worth tinkering with this if its raw in lightroom or camera raw to balance out the muddled colour.
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Weekend Photography Challenge #143 My Backyard in the forum Weekly Photography Challenge 10y, 9mo ago
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Canoe Sunset in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
that looks much better its got a nice flow and horizontal flip might help actually good suggestion
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Alps in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Alps in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Sun Setting on Mt. Rainier in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
think it needs little cloud definition.
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Rest (Self Portrait) in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
if its possible the teeth have lost all definition from being overly whitened .
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Canoe Sunset in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
Hello, yes thats it … not the best use of language sorry .
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Dan Fisher started the topic Alps in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Canoe Sunset in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
sorry also the little metal thing on the right might be worth just brining it down catches the eyes again removing it might give a better horizon
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Canoe Sunset in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
a quick note , there are a few little weeds sticking up i might be tempted to brush these out and maybe keep the water unbroken.
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Miami Pool Party in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
At first the chrome looks like a crack in the Earth it feels like a different version of the jetty on a smooth lake picture … maybe find some more contrast between the trees and the sky. at the top middle you should use a removal tool to get rid of the part of the palm fron(leaf) that leans down. maybe exaggerate the colour of the water against…[Read more]
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Portrait (new photographer) in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
I am seeing a halo round the head and you mention the textured background , but you have blurred it beyond being a texture. she does look nervous and its difficult to talk to people make them laugh … you are always shooting best tip i have ever had is , when they think your not shooting you will capture the person .. and remember the eyes are…[Read more]
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic First shot – UNEDITED in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
the bike is the focal point , maybe crop tighter convert to black and white or run a filter that washes out the colour and boost the red saturations i think this would enhance the beautiful foliage. and also enhance the basket.
If it is ok with you i could give you an example with your image
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic newbie….what do you think? in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
great foreground let down by the over exposure on the sky , looks like a weird yellow fringe on the top , maybe the contrast needs pulling up , you could try using something like photomatix to get better HDR photshop does a really bad job as I have learned from experience.
my eye is drawn to the sun first to expand on my comment at the top and…[Read more]
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Yellow Fields… in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
nothing stands out in this picture to me in Colour … however what about doing a b+w and then maybe making the bar stand out or maybe you could have changed the angle to get some sky .
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Dan Fisher replied to the topic Comment please 🙂 in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
As with everyone else , we have seen this image before , this is a beautiful if uneventful rendition however.
at the far right hand side of the pier there is a little black mark , i would remove it to give a little more smoothness , overall i think this might benefit from being black and white and making the grain in the wood really the focal…[Read more] -
Dan Fisher replied to the topic HDR Image in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
Hi,
My eye is drawn to the blue on the right hand side of the picture first and the middle and the sunset are secondary.
i think with a re-crop this image can pop.
also it might be worth running this through photmatix for some more contrast on the clouds and also pulling the brightness down on the sun itself.
Hope this helps
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