mike PENRITH

Like the sweeping stone wall which leads me to the trees, but over-contrast leaves them as vague black blobs. An old man sat on the grass chewing a twig would create more interest I feel.Check It Out

Walk to your left, cut out the space behind her, and snap the triangle between her rms with a little flash, so we can see a bit more.Check It Out

Nice pose, but due to the intense contrasts of his shirt, it dominates the picture instead of the subject. The eyes are the gateway to the soul, but the sunglasses hide them….?Check It Out

Welcome to the best photo site. Good composition, like the branches framing the subject. Flash would have lit the bird a little more.Check It Out

The head is in focus, so to improve the whole, crop vertical left and horizontal bottom, as there is too much out of focus background.Check It Out

Smashing shot, but I would shave off a vertical slice off the right – about one eighth – to give a better balance as a whole. Just my pennyworth.Check It Out

My only complaint is that I didn’t take it! Check It Out

Photo of bride and groom, or luxury limousine?Check It Out

The lavender is the topic, but there is competition from the building and sky. It’s what I call a “Rotator” image – your eyes rotate between the competing three.

Good point about the monitor calibration being suspect.Check It Out

Crop the image, so it is off centre?Check It Out

Any exposure/settings details? Not crisp enough for me, as the textures don’t leap off the screen.Check It Out

A fine record shot, but it doesn’t leap off the page for me. Print it on hard A3 paper, frame, then present to the museumCheck It Out

Good shot and exposure. I would have raised the camera to reduce the red, and perhaps taken the shot by moving a few steps to the right? Thanks for showing it.Check It Out

I too used to use that very car park, years ago.
Record shot it is, but I would move to your left, and frame the building at an acute angle, thus eliminating the tree and other clutter.
Agree a mono image would be better with lots of contrast to emphasise angles and iron work.
Hope this helps.Check It Out

Agree with el-dub. Reduce size of the flower, portraits are about focusing on the eyes, and a soft filter would improve her impact.Check It Out

Did you mean boundary? Agree with others – would you hang the print on your lounge wall?Check It Out

Inspiring shot, but the base isn’t horizontal. Check It Out

Good colour saturation. Try cropping at minus 20 degrees to give a better angle. Check It Out

Rule of thirds, perhaps a flashgun would just improve the title of the shot.Check It Out

DOF is the key factor here to improve shot, as above. Well done.Check It Out