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  • in reply to: Bridled White-Eye #95317
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      I’m drawn into the eye I’m assuming its in rule of thirds but it feels to centered. Cant tell if this is landscapre or portrait….also the green in thr bottom left corner seems almost photoshoped too smooth somehow? Which makes me look at the whole picture and wonder. (I mean that way in the best way possible)

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        Agree with prev posters but also I feel like your looking down at her and at an odd angle. I also feel like I need a place to focus. The sunglasses are odd to me. And the dress to busy.

        in reply to: Some Boston Pride #95315
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          No focus. No composition. No real story. No wow. ( 🙂 smiley for bravery)

          in reply to: Peculiar Pelican #95294
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            Thanks for the feedback but the eye is directly in the top right ROT hotspot 🙂

            in reply to: Comment Please #95278
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              very odd green light in the middle of the shot? very distracting….

              in reply to: Black and white #95264
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                I agree to all of those things. The catch lights here are actually sun outside in between some trees so not a lot of control but the photoshop was me! Also cant control a persons eyebrows so I am good with it!! 🙂 I am loving the Shark Tank!

                in reply to: Shark Tank #1. Negative feedback only #95259
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                  I think the focus behind the head blurs too much to fast.

                  in reply to: Engagement session #95257
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                    I think the angle is off, you can’t actually see the kiss so get confused with what to look at and then you end up on the flowers.

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                      I feel like the crop is too wide and lacks a focal point. My eye has no where to land….

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