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Trevor replied to the topic Dance like no one is watching in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
With respect Duncan it might be more constructive to say how the image could be improved. While the image might not be to everybody’s taste saying “hit the delete button” doesn’t really help the author to improve or self-edit their work in the future which I believe is the spirit of this forum? 🙂Check It Out
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Trevor replied to the topic Feed back please in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
Would be nice to know what you were trying to convey when you took the shot. Pier shots are always difficult as they’ve become a bit of a photographic clichĂ©. I like the fact it’s not the most typical angle and the composition overall but I think it could do with some more contrast. The only bright point is the least interesting part of the sky…[Read more]
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Trevor started the topic Dabbling with macro in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
Dabbling with macroJust started dabbling with macro. Wanted to convey the soft subtle beauty of this tulip. Criticism welcomed.
200mm macro lens
400 ISO
1/250 at f8Pretty In Pink by Trevor on Light Stalking
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okaytc uploaded a new picture: Pretty In Pink 10y, 2mo ago
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Trevor replied to the topic My first image posted in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
Thanks for your feedback @caimi. I originally had it as a large print and I definitely preferred the original crop as the landscape to infinity on the right is more obvious and as you say gives it a grander stage. At 500px size i’m in two minds. Would be very lucrative if Hallmark did use the image! 🙂 Check It Out
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Trevor replied to the topic Berlin Wall in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
My only additional comment on the original image was straightening the vertical of the windows against the crop on the right hand side but I see you sorted that too in the edited image! Looks great now. Long to go to Berlin myself.Check It Out
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Trevor replied to the topic Little girl in rural Uganda in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
I agree with the comments so far. OOF elements are good and her expression is good once face brightened. Also currently where the limb is cropped looks awkward to me but would be solved if she was right of frame.Check It Out
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Trevor replied to the topic My first image posted in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
Thanks for the feedback, I’ve cropped as suggested. I agree it works much better. The X100 has been fun, I quite like being limited to a single focal length.
cloudwalking_cropped.jpg by Trevor on Light StalkingCheck It Out
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Trevor replied to the topic Dance like no one is watching in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
I like the sense of movement in this shot. I’d probably crop a little more from the left, possibly to the edge of the red lights. I’d also selectively darken what appears to be a coffee machine etc so it falls more into shadow to focus the attention on the couple. The highlights on her ear and the thumb of her hand are distracting to me and you…[Read more]
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Trevor started the topic My first image posted in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
My first image postedIn this image I wanted to capture the romance of a couple walking in the hills hand in hand ascending into the clouds above my camera position.
Fuji X100
23mm (35mm FF eq)
ISO 200
f8
1/500 secPost processed in Silver Efex Pro 2
Feedback for improvement welcomed
cloudwalking.jpg by Trevor on Light StalkingCheck…[Read more]
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okaytc uploaded a new picture: cloudwalking.jpg 10y, 2mo ago
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Trevor replied to the topic Shark Tank-Help Please! in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 2mo ago
I agree with much of what’s been said. While I like both the elements individually for me this would have made two individual shots better than combining in a single scene where they compete. The wheel is more unusual and of most interest. I suspect there is a lot of interest in the textures from the buildings behind when more focus made of the…[Read more]
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