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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Dripping Bonsai Tree – Need input before next class in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
The square crop did help, thanks! I have also ordered some extension tubes to help with macro pictures. Hope this allows a deeper DOF, with more for the droplets and leaves in focus:-)
Thanks for the inputs, I appreciate them.Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Dripping Bonsai Tree – Need input before next class in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Here is an edited version to address the crop on top and right side per input from @gordonjames and @markspinner. It looks better to my eye, appreciate inputs on whether this is a better crop.
The out of focus areas are not fixable with my skill level of photo editing. Next time a deeper depth of field will be used and get more in…[Read more]
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Dripping Bonsai Tree – Need input before next class in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Thanks for the feedback @gordonjames and @markspinner.
The comments help me appreciate why I need to practice, refine, practice, refine, …:-)
The upper crop at the needs work and my eyes spend to much time on the drip. The shot is wide enough for a re-crop and will try that tonight. The out of focus area resulted from a narrow dept of field…[Read more] -
Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Upstate stream in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
I really like the softness, color and gentle curves of the stream. Just wonder if a portrait view would lead the eye even more through the stream.Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn started the topic Dripping Bonsai Tree – Need input before next class in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Dripping Bonsai Tree – Need input before next class Hello,
I am in a photo composition class and before getting the reviews this Thursday, would appreciate inputs on the dripping Bonsai tree:-)
Thanks!
2014-07-19 Bonzia 192.jpg by Patrick Krohn on Light Stalking Check It Out Reply to Topic
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Macro of lots of water droplets in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Nice updates to the images, both are cleaner and more powerful to my eye:-)Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Macro of lots of water droplets in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Just my thoughts on the background. The green is wonderful while the dark spots were a bit strong and enough contrast to distract my eye. Perhaps just my personal taste, shades of green versus green/black is more relaxing and less distracting to my eye.
Appreciate your photo and the discussion!Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Macro of lots of water droplets in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Really like the water on the leaves. Both images have something on the right side that distracted my eye from the water droplets. The water droplets are quite spectacular. The green/black background pulled my eye away from the water.
Thanks for sharing, nice work!Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Cornfield in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Wow, like the like the blue, green and golden colors. The crop on the right side drew my eye when first looking at the image. After looking at it more closely, the little hay roll took my ey away for the nice leading lines at the center, to the tree and sky. Other than that, it is a really nice shot to my eye.Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Exploring the car graveyard in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Like to old car and curious boy in the picture. The contrast in the image to my eye is a challenge. The rust/paint edge does not jump out and reinforce old car, to paint seems blurred and soft whereas a old car to my recollection will be damage discolored paint.
The tree branch in the upper left is an nice lead into the car and boy. The…[Read more]
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Sundog in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
This may sound odd, but i tried holding some paper around the edges to experiment with crops. Cropping left and right sides to the edge of the dome while cropping the top down to the peak of the dome seems to be a cleaner image to my eye. That crop lets my imagination fill in that there is a sun hidden behind the peaks.
All the best.
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Bright over Black in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Like the contrast and isolation of the blossoms, very dominate and pulled my eyes back and forth between the two blossoms. Sometimes odds work e.g. 1 or 3 blossoms.Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Initial post and appreciate feedback in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
The feedback is very helpful. Good point on landscape orientation and wider perspective. I have tweaked the original based on the feedback and it is a better photo:-) Check It Out
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Patrick Krohn replied to the topic Initial post and appreciate feedback in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Appreciate the inputs!
Those are items I struggled with, wider angle, car coming thru tunnel and exposure. Waited about 30 minutes for a car coming out of the tunnel but no luck. The exposure was set for the tunnel to keep it black which overexposed the road a bit but agree it may have overexposed the road. This is a crop of a wider angle…[Read more] -
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Patrick Krohn started the topic Initial post and appreciate feedback in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 9y, 9mo ago
Initial post and appreciate feedbackHi,
S-curve road leading to tunnel on road up to Olympic mountain summit. Thoughts on this image appreciated. I am currently enrolled in a composition photography class and the benefits of constructive criticism:-)
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