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  • in reply to: this guy here #210177
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      Welcome back to the world of creating images! EXIF data is helpful when you post an image. Suggestion on framing – if you choose to crop some of the model’s persona – in this case head/hair – be deliberate so that it doesn’t appear like a snapshot. Cropping in close is a strong way to direct the viewer. The antenna and reflection on the mirror housing are a bit of a distraction; the position of the sun makes him look a bit squinty – perhaps a fill flash or reflector/diffuser to soften the strain on the eyes. Have you looked at the image in black and white? It may create a connection not available with color. Excellent capture on expression and engagement.

      in reply to: Close Encounters with the Library of Congress #206044
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        Interesting image; I would like to see just a bit more detail in the dark ceiling – just enough to provide context and enable the dynamic lines of the vault to complete their assignment of leading the viewer to the oculus. Composition looks good – I like the fact that you selected a fairly close crop; nice color contrast.

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          Wonderful image- the saturation and lighting are superb! The darkened background adds to the ambience and the story; the pomegranate is wonderfully captured. The subtle dynamics created by the frame in the background leads the viewer immediately to the subject. Overall, an excellent capture!

          in reply to: Under the Bridge – colour or B&W ? #205960
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            Both images have their unique strengths: the color is remarkable as a monochrome image, with tremendous range of tone and texture. The dynamic range of blue leads the viewer into the photo and frames the entry to the photo well. The yellow graffiti works as a contrasting color but does not dominate the image. The black and white is a wonderful study in texture but, in my opinion, lacks the punch that the color image provides. The b/w seems to flatten the image rather than add the depth experienced in the color image. The graffiti becomes more important in the b/w image primarily as a result of contrast. Overall, while both images work, for me the color is the most compelling, most memorable of the two.

            in reply to: Please Critique – Jazz Musician #203983
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              I agree with Lenny – rule of thirds would definitely strengthen the image; there appears to be a potential story between the person sitting on the bench oblivious or ignoring the horn player – perhaps it’s too late but a different POV could have pulled the two together. Also, if you choose to highlight the musician, a portrait orientation may provide a bit more isolation and eliminate some of the peripheral details that are a bit distracting. I am a fan of black and white – you have captured a moment and I like the overall feel of the image.

              in reply to: Wild Flower pic with dew #202782
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                Beautifully executed image!

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                  Love the photo and the intent; would black and white more dramatically reveal the character you reference?

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                    Often the power of a moment in our lives is best revealed in black and white. Technically, there are probably tweaks you could make to the image (e.g. lighten the shadow over her left eye a bit more or soften/blur the background a bit more, etc.), but the pathos and angst of your image makes it unforgettable. You have captured an incredible moment and touched my heart in the process. Thank you for sharing; I wouldn’t change a thing.

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                      Wonderful capture with excellent focus on the tiger’s eyes/face. The bright spot on the rocks directly behind the tiger seems to compete with the highlights over his eyes – can be eliminated in Lightroom. Excellent POV and aspect ratio – creating tension and expectation. Image is slightly underexposed, which adds a bit of mystery – but a bit more exposure for the tiger’s face may draw the viewer more quickly to the eyes. Overall, a very compelling image.

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                        When the subject of an image is one of the most widely recognized, widely photographed icons on the planet, the success of the capture moves to the context rather than the subject. You have created a very compelling image, one that compels the viewer to acknowledge his/her relationship with the image as well as the subject. Your exposure is perfect; the balance and composition could not be improved. I am moved by the image and what I, as the viewer, take from it. One of the best images of Lady Liberty I have experienced. Thank you!

                        in reply to: First Critique #184863
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                          Beautiful perspective – the overall image is a little dark. Increasing the brightness some, especially to highlight the nearest balloons should not detract from the overall emotion but strengthen the visuals of the image. A hot air balloon shoot is on my bucket list.

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                            Excellent image – crop, focus, and composition are stellar. The eyes dominate the image such that I’m not certain you need to spend much time on the nose. Very well done!

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                              Very interesting capture! The natural environment almost provides a natural vignette…except for the top there the light highlights the foliage. A neutral density filter in LR or burn in with PS may keep the focus on the falls. Excellent image!

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                                Beautiful model and reflection – I think the ‘glamour’ feel would be achieved by cropping in much closer, filling frame with just the model and her reflection. The full gown, the shoes, and the credenza make it more of a snapshot than a glamour image. The color of the gown works very well for her; the color of the bodice echoed in the mirror’s frame pull the image together well…just needs to be a tighter shot.

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                                  I like the crop – creates more tension than normally found in a floral image. Agree with the detritis – good balance and saturation. Very nice image.

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                                    Beautiful capture – the reflections in his eyeglasses are the only distraction.

                                    in reply to: Please critique BnW Barn Owl #173381
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                                      Excellent capture – the grunge edit works well – a tighter crop, maybe switching to a portrait orientation, may accentuate the owl and diminish the impact of the handler’s glove.

                                      in reply to: Snow storm in Santa Fe NM #173377
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                                        Agree with the crop – you might consider cropping to a 16 x 10 format; the stairs in the lower left of the photo seem distracting. Also, a graduated filter may produce a more dramatic sky. The lines of the wall are unique and both lead the viewer into the image and provide a frame within a frame.

                                        in reply to: Okinawa light house after typhoon #173373
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                                          Good composition and balance; a bit more contrast and clarity may darken the background and emphasize the lighthouse. Very nice image.

                                          in reply to: Safe in car seat #172764
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                                            Love the image – agree with @tobiepsg that a bit more light on the baby’s face would draw the viewer immediately to the eyes. The arm rest on the right seems to compete – a graduated filter might help along the right side of the image.

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