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Boulders on Beach

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There seems to be a well defined square around the middle group of people.?Margins of the mask.

I also think that a mono conversion would enhance the mood of the Photo.

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Cropping the bottom of the frame would remove most of the mothers blouse, which is too prominent in the photo.

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Cropping out the lamp posts at the top makes for a stronger composition.Otherwise I quite like the shot.

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Hi Andy

We all have the problem of being at a picturesque spot at the wrong time of the day.There seems to be a lot of haze in the back ground.My suggestions:

Crop the lake just below the swan.

Remove some of the featureless sky while avoiding a central horizon.Level horizon.

Try dehazing in Lightroom or PS or Affinity Photo.

If possible retake during the golden hour.

Cheers

Faan

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Try cropping out most of the trees on the right,make it a portrait format.You would lose the blurred trees and improve the composition.Monochrome would probably work.

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Excellent shot.Maybe add a little contrast and as others have mentioned,lighten the foreground shadows.

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