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Thanks Kent. I never thought about that possibility, but It provides a completely different result. I like it.
Robert, regarding the crop, I agree and I thought about it at the moment of shooting, but I had no time to change the lens. I was forced to get as much as I could with that limitation.
Thanks Gary, Thanks Dahlia. You are right. But I had my 70-200 mounted and I was like 5 to 6 meters above the car and no time to change the lens, so no way to go wider. Nevertheless, I sort of like the sense of proximity.
Thanks Jerry, I see your point, but I was more focused on the geometrical figure and tried to center on the frame the tight crossing points in the vanishing point
Darren, I like it as it is. It tells a story and the mood is very pleasant. Many things could be changed but the result would be a different story. I generally like a wider range of tones but not in this composition. Sorry not to add a critical comment, but I can’t.
Great shot Erik. Just two comments. I would have reduced a little more the crop to get a composition based on less elements (may be six in two rows) and also a bit more front light, without loosing the dimension that the existing lighting provides.
Thanks. I will upload later something more to test general views about it.
Thanks Darren, you are right in all your points, sunset color, 24’70 lens and lack of point of interest. I am experimenting with my new camera and testing this forum. Probably it wasn´t the best shot choice.
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Does it work?For me, it looks like the most interesting part of the shot is the boat, but it can’t be seen properly. Plus, something wrong with the sky, maybe too dark.
Great shot. I love it. My only comment from a composition POV is that the girl to the right looks to the edge and away from the focal point, pulling too much my eye to her and to the right edge. The rest is pretty balanced and attractive to me.
Erik,
This is my first comment on this site. I hope this helps. I agree with previous comments on people size and relation to title. Leading lines well depicted but unrelated to the subject. It seems like there is something missing or the oposite. I think both things would have worked.
