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Valerie Harris replied to the topic Critique please in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
Adding to @tersha‘s comments, for the purpose of showing how teaching is done, I would have liked to see the operator (addition, subtraction or multiplication sign).
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Valerie Harris replied to the topic Emma in Morningside in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
The hands seem awkwardly positioned, especially the one by her face. The position makes the veins in her hand & arm stand out. Maybe try both hands in her lap. Also, it looks like some of the detail is lost in the jacket on her left shoulder.
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Valerie Harris replied to the topic Some Critique Please in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
Try cropping to remove some of the left side of the photo. That side isn’t very interesting & detracts from the most interesting part on the
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