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Paul Gass replied to the topic Please Critique in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
I would get a lot more light in the shadows. It is always the eyes that make a portrait. You can hardly see her eyes. Have her turn her face toward the light more.
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Paul Gass replied to the topic Portrait practice in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
I would crop in from the left, almost to her hair and crop off the bottom almost up to her fingers. If you have something like lightroom, I would lighten the front of her hair and the darker right side of her face. Nice eyes so crop in to have just her head and hands in the picture. That would highlight the mood I see in her eyes. Great start.
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Paul Gass replied to the topic Lights at St Joseph's Church in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
I like it but I also would crop off the top 1/5th of the picture, down to the wood. Also cut down the bright highlights of the photo to cut down on the light reflecting off the wood. Nice shot though.
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Paul Gass replied to the topic Critique my Tomatoes in the forum The Shark Tank Feedback Forum 10y, 9mo ago
I would put the tomatoes together, maybe touching each other and then crop in quite a bit to high lite the tomatoes. The way it is I don ,t know what the main point of the picture is. Get rid of the whole lower left corner. Remember that your eye goes the brightest part of the picture. Good shooting.
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