MaryandNeil

I had to look long and hard at this and I think I can feel what its trying to do but I dont think it makes it for me. The arms in the wall blend in too much and seem a bit of an afterthought, when they could be the highlight of the photo. I am not sure how, but if it could be edited to make the arms appear as though they are coming through the…[Read more]

I would have to agree that the central position of the boat leaves me feeling its a bit empty, less of heading out into the unknown and more, well empty. I get the detail in the water in the foreground but ti doesn’t make up for the all the negative space. I would have to agree with trying a landscape crop and have the boats bottom right 2/3 of…[Read more]

Thanks Graham, one to experiment with then I think.

Yes , subtle but effective its taken some of the excessive sheen of the glass and from around the silhouette. I used a flash with no moderation to create the silhouette as I thought the point source would be more effective, any opinion as to whether a soft box or umbrella would have been a better option?

Hi and thanks for the comments, really appreciated. I would love to see you edit if possible.

D’oh, damn that predictive text😀

Thanks, I will try your suggestions out and the sharpening seems to be a common thread amongst the contributors so that something to sort out.