[Mirudusha]

@yumarena Thank You So Much !!!!!

[Mirudusha]

Thank You @tobiepsg !

Yes, I agree that the nose is a little out of focus. I was so close to it…and I wanted to aim the eyes.
And I’m using a kit lens (Canon 18-55mm).

I had to crop because there was a white shade of the cage bar. Now I think about it I could have photo-shopped it rather than a tight crop.

Thank You Again!

[Mirudusha]

@nanyar I use LR5 and photoshop CS5. I have to get used to post-processing. I will redo it again.

[Mirudusha]

@ed-aldridge It seems like i have to redo the picture again. I’m also not satisfied with the output. I will take your advice and re-post.

[Mirudusha]

@yumarena Haha! What you said is true. But I’m quite unsure about this picture.

@tersha Sure, I will do that from my next post ! Thank you.

@admin Yes, They are more blue than white. I will correct it.

@el-dub I couldn’t get near to him, because he was far away. But I wish I could have gone closer to the subject.

[Mirudusha]

@ed-aldridge I always thought the horizon should be in the middle. Thanks for clarifying. I will take your advice !
Unfortuantely I can’t recreate this shot again. But I will make sure I get that one right. Thanks Again!

[Mirudusha]

I would prefer if this photo is in color. Your description suggests that you are trying to reflect the Indian culture through your photograph.

In my opinion “Cultures are colorful”. The colors express their culture. Behind those three men there is a paddy field which could have been represented with a beautiful shade of green.

And cheers for making those men feel comfortable to be in a photograph !

[Mirudusha]

Hi,
If you can go back to this place…..try taking a photo at night time.
You may get a better picture with all the lights and reflections of the buildings.

[Mirudusha]

Hi,

I like the colours ! But the bee is out of focus.
About the composition :
It would have been better if the whole flower is in the picture. And the bee in focus.

[Mirudusha]

Hi Guys !

Thank you so much for your comments ! You guys are great !

I took some of your advice and edited the picture.
But I find myself sticking to sepia and the washed out background. (I intentionally did it….!)

I reduced the exposure, increased the contrast and clarity.
I also took care of the black spot above the lips.

Please tell me if the below photograph is what you expected to see.

IMG_2632-Edit.jpg by Mirudusha on Light Stalking

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