Candida Tate

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I have it on Flickr, there is the link. Thank you for the suggestions, I agree with cropping and making the bird stand out more. @yumarena, I am unfamiliar with daren? My purpose for joining this forum is to develop my skills so all input is appreciated and welcome.
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Perhaps but the blur emphasizes the movement of the children in general with sharp focus on the girl who is smiling. Cropping would bring you closer to her and the girl in front of her while getting rid of some of the blur.Check It Out

I would select an 8X10 landscape crop box then slide far left putting the butterfly to the far right and sort of centering the flowers that are in sharp focus. It would follow the rule of thirds that way.Check It Out

The women in the right left corner distracts from the photo, she looks almost disembodied but the man looking on in the background really seems to add to the shot. Check It Out

The colors really stand out, some people may think less shadow on his face would bring out his features but I think it adds an air of mystery. In contrast her face is kissed by the light and open. I like the emotions conveyed by the dancers. He shows his desire for her and she seems to bask in the adoration. I like the dark background, nothing…[Read more]