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    • #517201
      VALERY
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        @valeryp
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        here with the help of texture I tried to create kinda unique look ..

        any feedback would be well come

         

         

      • #517244
        Tersha
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          @tersha
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          I looked at this a couple of times Valery, and I like it a lot, but I’m not totally into the texture on the jug … not sure.

        • #517245
          beth
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            • https://www.instagram.com/naught.figs/
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            @loki
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            the contrast & light on the jug doesn’t match the rest of the scene, it’s darker than the bread, despite being white.  i like the rest of the image, but i keep looking at the jug and focusing on it.  there’s some weird artifacts or banding pattern going on with the jug too.

          • #517299
            Dahlia Ambrose
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              @dahliaambrose
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              Love the tones and textures Valery. I think reducing the vignette a bit more would help 🙂

            • #517397
              Rob Wood (Admin)
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                @admin-2
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                I’d be experimenting with the texture, but using that delete brus on certain parts. I am not sure it works well on the jug. I also be careful of introducing softness to the image.

                It’s still a great image, but your still lifes are at such a high level, that I am not sure you need to change anything too dramatic.

              • #517409
                JasenkaG
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                  @jasenkag
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                  I agree with Dahlia. Reducing the vignette here is a good idea.

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