#2591

[VALERY]

I’ve made about 20 versions of the image mostly working on colors\lighting and framing..

this is the last one-does it work?

[beth]

i like the scene, but feel that the sides are cropped too tight and there’s too much empty space at the top.  nice lighting.  it seems like it’s lacking in the highlights, but i’m at work and can’t really tell on the crap monitors we use.

[JasenkaG]

I love the colors, but I agree with Beth. The crop seems to be too tight at the sides.

[VALERY]

thanks Beth And Jasenka

hope it’s a tad better now..

[beth]

i’d go for a square(ish) crop.  the empty space at the top doesn’t add anything to the image and makes it feel off balance.   i also brightened the fleshy part of the pumpkin where the light is hitting.

 

 

[Dahlia Ambrose]

Hi Valery. beautiful colours and light. I agree with Beth’s comment about the crop and I like her crop with most of the empty space on top cropped out 🙂

[Rob Wood (Admin)]

I almost went straight to framing before remember how lame that is as a feedback.

This is superb to my mind.

[Lenny Wollitz]

I like your second crop but not the 1×1.  I’m  a fan of negative space.  I love the lighting!

[Rob Wood (Admin)]

Remember folks, this is the Shark Tank. It doesn’t need to be gourd vibes only.

 

Sorry, I’ll show myself out.

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