Where sky and earth meet – Landscape B & W 1/400sec f5 4.1mm ISO 80 DMC-TZ6

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    • #446280
      Toi
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      where sky and earth meet

    • #446287
      Dahlia Ambrose
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      @toiskellern Hi Toi, this is a beautiful image. Love the brilliant details of the sky and clouds.

      In terms of feedback, you have to straighten the horizon a bit. It is a bit confusing because the landscape looks like an area with a slight slope.

      It would also be nice to see a bit more of the foreground. There are some pieces of wood that are a bit bright and taking away the attention. May be selectively brush them and darken them a bit. Not sure what you think 🙂

    • #446293
      3pco
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      Great idea to put this in BW. Has to be seen large, the sky is really interesting. I agree with Dahlia about straightening a little, the fence posts lean to the left.

      I like how you pushed the foreground texture to match the sky, maybe showing more of that would be good. But you could have played the same game with the trees left and right, and I’ll bet that would add even more to this very striking shot.

    • #446327
      Frank
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      Cannot think how to improve this.  Very nice!

    • #446371
      Toi
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      Thank you for the valuable information – I will try and see if I can improve on what I have at present.

      I appreciate your remarks a lot.

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