Who ARE you?

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    • #430905
      Philip Watts
      Participant

      More compositing work. Spent some time on this trying to get the overall feel right together with the story telling.  In particular I was unsure about the Cafe sign on the right. Is it a distraction or does it help to show that the large image is graffiti?

      Quite please with the results, but I am sure there will be improvements suggested and all will be welcome!

      Who ARE you?

       

    • #430910
      JasenkaG
      Keymaster

      Hi Philip, I think I would remove the cafe sign, I find it a bit distracting.

      Other than that the image looks pretty good and this yellow/purple combo is quite eye-catching.

    • #430915
      Dahlia Ambrose
      Keymaster

      Hi Philip, I really like the image. I agree with Jasenka about removing the cafe sign as it takes attention away from the subject 🙂

    • #430919
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      I like the image. I’d try square crop to emphasize painted face – little girl relation. The left part and the right one is useless imho.
      I wonder if different color of girls coat would add to the color balance or not….

    • #430925
      Kent DuFault
      Participant

      At first, I was going to say remove the sign. But when I cover it with my hand, something does seem missing. The sign lends a sense of reality and spatial perception.

    • #430929
      Petr Nowak
      Participant

      @Kent: interesting point of view. I wonder how would the image looks like if include more of the world around….

    • #430953
      bucweeet
      Participant

      I think the foot on the LH side requires a small amount more of shadow to connect it to the ground.

      I prefer the Cafe sign out as my eyes are drawn to the eyes on the wall and then to the girl.

      Really nicely done Petr!

    • #431106
      Tom M
      Participant

      I think the sign is a bit distracting too, but, perhaps first you could try and lighten it some, and see how you like that. I do like the composite though…

       

       

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